Save Me.
the walls are closing in.
Save Me.
from the demons that live within.
Save Me.
my mind begins to spin.
Save Me.
from this unfitting skin.
Save Me.
for they are whispering sin.
Save Me.
for my life is about to end.
Save Me.
the walls are closing in.
Save Me.
from the demons that live within.
Save Me.
my mind begins to spin.
Save Me.
from this unfitting skin.
Save Me.
for they are whispering sin.
Save Me.
for my life is about to end.
March 25th, 2012 at 9:18 pm
I am partial to list poems to start with but this is a good one. I am also partial to poems that can catch an emotion with simple direct clarity – again, well done.
March 25th, 2012 at 11:03 pm
i’m glad i could get you to enjoy a poem outside of your normal tastes. Thanks for the complements!
March 26th, 2012 at 12:14 pm
Reblogged this on Munazahgulzar's Blog and commented:
stand by me
when I in Me don’t want to be…
March 26th, 2012 at 5:22 pm
I like this very much for sometimes i feel the same, and yet by some act of god and will we manage to survive……….
March 26th, 2012 at 6:22 pm
yes hopefully the last line never rings true! thanks for commenting.
March 27th, 2012 at 7:15 am
np just doin’ the do