April 4, 2012

Yes God?

By notificationsofnonsense

If you look to God,

you might see,

there’s a plan for you

and a plan for me.

but for me and you

and you and me

who does he want?

what can we be?

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4 responses to “Yes God?”

earthslang
April 4th, 2012 at 11:34 pm

I’m trying to tell whether this poem is as simple and unpretentious as it seems or whether you’re subtly making a point about something deeper, like free will v determinism. It’s just so clean and simple and unlike some of your other stuff.

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- marcofreschi
  April 5th, 2012 at 10:16 am
  
  Check out this poem, I think you’d like it https://originalpoetry.org/2012/01/18/is-god-for-me/
  
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- notificationsofnonsense
  April 5th, 2012 at 11:13 am
  
  I don’t want to interpret the poem for you. I think that is best left up to the reader, but I do think it’s good to change it up once and a while.
  
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razorbladeconfessions
April 9th, 2012 at 10:27 am

interesting… you want to interpret a love affair?

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