If you see me,
crying in the dark
don’t ask me where I’m from,
don’t ask me where I’ve been,
Just let me in.
If you see me,
begging on my knees
yelling “please, God, please”
with no answers to my pleas,
Just let me in.
Everyone has
some troubles in life.
Everyone has
some grief and strife.
Sometimes we need
a helping hand,
to bring us up
and help us stand.
Original Poetry 
February 3rd, 2012 at 5:03 pm
Yelling “please, God, please”
Definitely stood out.
I can definitely feel the suffering, and I don’t ever want to sit still while I could let someone in.
February 3rd, 2012 at 9:49 pm
Awesome poem!
February 4th, 2012 at 1:23 pm
Thanks guys!
February 5th, 2012 at 1:32 pm
Great poem notificationsofnonsense! I think it’s important that people always realize that they aren’t the only ones with problems, everybody has problems, and it’s important for us to help others as they help us. This poem really makes readers recognize the circumstances surrounding every individual, and I think it’s very beautifully worded
February 5th, 2012 at 3:50 pm
Wow! That was an amazing poem, you´re really talented! Keep on writing 🙂
February 5th, 2012 at 4:25 pm
thanks so much!
February 6th, 2012 at 8:48 am
I like this poem! Well done!
February 6th, 2012 at 6:55 pm
thanks!
March 1st, 2012 at 10:26 pm
We’ve all been there. One of my favs now.
March 1st, 2012 at 10:43 pm
thanks! it means a lot to hear that